How my research paper is easily identifiable,
In my paper, the thesis is very identifiable and the paragraphs are all in order of when the event took place. The gun control is a very good topic to talk about and has a lot of argumentative sides to it. My argument is very straight forward and to the point.
Clarity and Coherence,
Coherence of my paper I suppose could be clearer and more to the point, I do tend to get off topic from time to time and don't relate it back to the thesis. The clarity of my paper could also be redone a little better, the points in my paper are there i just need to relate them back to the main focus and also make sure my main focus is stated better.
Use of sources and evidence,
My sources are their and they are stated pretty clearly, they just need to be related more back to the original point. Some of the evidence that I use are pretty much supporting a different type of topic all together or I have made it relate back to my original point by either changing the way I use it, or by formatting it to help emphasis a point that is trying to be made.
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